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| 高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)六考點(diǎn) |
| 作者:陳維東 文章來(lái)源:本站原創(chuàng) 點(diǎn)擊數(shù) 更新時(shí)間:2017-04-05 文章錄入:admin 責(zé)任編輯:admin |
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考點(diǎn)五 考查語(yǔ)句間連接成分的使用能力 要想寫(xiě)好一篇文章,僅僅具備基本的遣詞造句的能力還是不夠的,因?yàn)榧词挂黄恼轮械乃芯渥佣际钦_的,但若各句之間沒(méi)有必要的連接成分,那只能算是一篇沒(méi)有錯(cuò)誤的文章,絕不能算是一篇好文章。請(qǐng)看一篇實(shí)例: 假定你是李華,David 是你的美國(guó)筆友。他對(duì)中國(guó)鼓勵(lì)使用環(huán)保購(gòu)物袋很感興趣,來(lái)信向你詢(xún)問(wèn)此事。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)封回信。主要內(nèi)容如下:感謝他的關(guān)注;簡(jiǎn)要介紹相關(guān)情況;談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?/SPAN> 請(qǐng)看下面這篇文章(缺乏必要的連接成分): Dear David, I’m glad that you’ve noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection. Thank you for your concern. Too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution. Our government encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags. These bags are made of a variety of material. They can be easily treated when they become rubbish. They can be reused. More and more people in I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the many steps we are to make our country an even cleaner place. Yours, Li Hua 然后,再請(qǐng)看看下面這篇(加上連接成分): Dear David, I’m glad that you’ve noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection. Thank you for your concern. As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our government encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags. These bags are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. Besides, they can be reused. More and more people in I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the many steps we are to make our country an even cleaner place. Yours, Li Hua 考點(diǎn)六 考查使用高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的能力 前面我們已經(jīng)提到,近年來(lái)的高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)有了很大變化,由原來(lái)只要求考生寫(xiě)對(duì),轉(zhuǎn)而要求考生寫(xiě)好,同時(shí)鼓勵(lì)考生嘗試使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句型,并對(duì)由此所產(chǎn)生的錯(cuò)誤采取了寬容態(tài)度。如書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的第五檔(最好一檔)的要求是:“……應(yīng)用了較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯;語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有些許錯(cuò)誤,但為盡力使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)和高級(jí)詞匯所致。” 從最近幾年的書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分實(shí)踐來(lái)看,使用高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的能力在書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分越來(lái)越得到評(píng)卷老師的重視,它往往是一篇文章能否得高分或滿(mǎn)分的重要方面。請(qǐng)看一篇實(shí)例: 假定你是李華,你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信向你咨詢(xún)?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)封回信:參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班;看中文書(shū)刊、電視;學(xué)唱中文歌曲;交中國(guó)朋友。 |
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